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Friday, February 20, 2015

just write: right at the sun.

right at the sun poem

I can’t forget the things you said, 
no matter how I try. 
so I stare right at the sun 
and try my best to fly. 
I can’t forget the way I felt, 
no matter what I do. 
so I stare up at the sky
and hope that I see you. 
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8 comments:

  1. Rebecca ChapmanFebruary 20, 2015 at 9:51 AM

    You have a serious talent for poetry! So beautiful!

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  2. LaynahFebruary 20, 2015 at 10:54 AM

    That is beautiful. And I really love how you edited it!

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  3. Kenzie SmithFebruary 20, 2015 at 12:55 PM

    You are such an amazing writer!

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  4. JessicaFebruary 20, 2015 at 1:59 PM

    Beautiful!

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  5. Brooks OakwoodFebruary 20, 2015 at 5:34 PM

    I love how haunting this feels.

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  6. MFebruary 21, 2015 at 1:47 AM

    This is such lovely writing. And I couldn't help but peek at the post before this one on your blog, and To All the Boys I Loved Before is an amazing book!! Haha I just saw that. But yeah, this is actually so beautiful. I love your writing almost as much as Jenny Han's.

    I've also nominated you for the Best Blogging Buddies award! Here's the link: http://thelyfoflittleme.blogspot.com.au/2015/02/a-bundle-of-questions-answers-and-facts.html

    -M
    The Life of Little Me

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  7. Nicole MaricaFebruary 23, 2015 at 12:41 PM

    i love this, it reminds me of the greek myth of Icarus (which happens to be my favorite myth!)

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  8. CrystalMarch 1, 2015 at 6:36 PM

    I love this one! A couple of different meanings popped into mind as I read it. :)

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